This is a first page and a second page, I really like these. I decided to stick the letter inside a little house or arrow, going for that "top floor" imagery.
Another simpler version
Nooooo, I don't think so.
Started with the most obvious, just to get it out of my head.
Lemme know if you have any ideas that could help me.
I don't mind the pattern in the background for the stationery Austin. I think picking a darker gray for the type would be something to consider, if you decide to keep the background pattern. That way it won't be hard to read the stationery. The gray used in the bottom example for the words "TOP FLR", that would work. It's bolder and stronger.
ReplyDeleteThe layout for the middle is good, with the triangles on the left and right side of the stationery. I would think the triangle on the left could use less space, it feels like the body of text is being forced to be too close to the paper edge.
these are all great, Austin. Love the idea of the arrow. Maybe try bringing it down a tad, transperency or so, or maybe the arrow goes lighter as it goes up? Eh, just an idea. These are really nice, I think
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